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Cyclopes Inks

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Well i'm off To SDCC! Did this piece up to put on the cover of my portfolio.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

If I can be honest, this isn't your best work. I like the idea, Cyclops shooting a blast is always a classic, and you have his body in a pretty good pose for the action of the shot. Your hands are beautiful, as usual, but his muscles just don't seem right to me.
I can't quite figure out where his left hand is meant to be, I think it may be turned too much to face us, hard to tell with the angle you've done. His bicep should probably curl more when he bends his elbow, but you've raised his left pec to follow the raised arm, which is good.
I'm not great with figuring out shading ( I tend to not do it...) so can't comment much on your shades, but I think you should have put more of a curve to the line shades on the abs. They look flat, and make his abs look like they've been stuck on.
His facial expression is nice, the spittle is a nice touch. His chin looks a little thin to me, and is possibly sticking out a little much.

Sorry if I'm being harsh on this, but I believe you have done better work...